First 10 Pages: Part 1
How fast will you turn off a movie? 10 minutes? Less? (It’s usually less… Oof.) So what keeps us interested? There's a lot of heavy lifting that goes on at the beginning of a film. Setting the tone, characters, conflicts and the hook are just the tip of the iceberg.
So let’s break it down, starting this week with World Building.
One of my favourite horror movies is Fede Alvarez’s Evil Dead (2013) and it’s been my go to example for a first 10 page breakdown since I started doing coverage.
The first 6 words in the screenplay are as follows.
“Ext. - Woods. Night. A dark forest.”
Wild that even 6 words can be deep dived, so let's go!
Tapping into our primal fears of the dark, generational programming from folklore/legends about the woods (Brothers Grimm come to mind.), and the exposure of the outdoors all come through from these six words. These emotions set the tone of the story, and the world.
Bonus points for phrasing it as “Dark Forest” rather than a forest. It’s outside and at night, we should know it’s dark; but there's a supernatural evil in these woods…
So in 6 words, he’s established the tone, a location, and a world with supernatural evil… Talk about heavy lifting!
And yes, all dues to Sam Raimi for pioneering this whole franchise with his short film Within The Woods, but I honestly feel that doesn’t take away from the efficacy of these 6 words.
From a production side however, what stands out are the complications of an exterior night shoot in the woods. Transportation for cast and crew, equipment, generators, blocking, safety… ect... These are all considered when greenlighting a production, and starting off this way could be a tougher pill to swallow. (I for one am glad they did!)
Having a great idea for a screenplay is certainly the first step, but if a screenwriter takes its execution into their writing? Then you already have a leg up on getting a greenlight!
What are some of your favourite openers? What makes them stand out to you? Please let me know and if this kind of coverage interests you, please check me out at Coverpagepro.com.
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