Includes HQ grammar. Compatible with background replacers. No more irrelevant gameplay tips. Edits vanilla load screen messages for full immersion and better cohesion with mods.
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This mod does not have any known dependencies other than the base game.
This patch was made to accompany this mod and MLU.
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Thanks to Bethesda and the original creators of TES Lore, as we continue to enjoy immersing ourselves in the world they created.
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Changelogs
Version 1.3
Eliminated a vanilla reference to specific dragon colors being relevant to their power, which is refuted or made inconsistent by many dragon overhauls. I made the statement vague enough to be true either way.
Found and corrected another missing comma in a vanilla message.
"Corrected" an inconsistent capitalization choice present in vanilla and my rewrite by avoiding it entirely.
Improved diction of a previous rewrite or two. It's a never-ending battle only because I'm never satisfied, haha.
Version 1.2
Fixed 3 remaining missing character box issues that slipped the net previously.
Minor grammar corrections and tweaks.
Dozens of rewrites. Lots of attempts were made to increase clarity and readability while retaining that medieval feel inherent to the diction of The Elder Scrolls.
A few lore corrections.
Version 1.1
Fixed a missing character box appearing instead of an apostrophe in some messages.
Fixed a missing character box appearing instead of an ellipsis for one message.
Added overrides (rewrites) for a few more messages that were initially overlooked.
Fixed/improved grammar and diction in some messages.
Version 1.0
Initial release.
Note: This mod does NOT edit load screen background images, font style, or interface format. Those are up to your own modlist.
I was tired of Skyrim's vanilla load screens failing to enhance my immersion by giving me instructions on buttons to press, stats to increase, and ways to earn EXP. It was also annoying to receive these tutorial-type tips when they didn't even apply to my game, because mods.
I searched, but found no mods that quite accomplished what I was looking for. There are mods that add new load screens, and others that overwrite small (rarely large) portions of the messages, but none fulfilled my standards for grammar as a professional (I am admittedly hard to please) as well as my desire for immersion. Pretty much all mods titled "load screen replacer" are talking about images. The vanilla messages still get cycled into the game separate from their background image—unless an author takes the time to apply false conditions to all 354+ vanilla load screen record entries.
Thus dissatisfied, I cracked open xEdit and got to work on those 354+ messages. I made any necessary corrections and revised or rewrote most (~70%) of the game's load screen text. Lore excerpts and quotes were left alone—other than fixing typos—since they are already immersive. Any messages that had to be replaced were supplanted by excerpts of TES Lore from The Unofficial Elder Scrolls Pages and the other TES games, or freshly written by me based on these sources.
There are USSEP and Non-USSEP versions of this mod, since USSEP also applies fixes to these records, adds new relevant records, and even fixes a few grammatical issues.
This mod ONLY makes changes to the WORDS displayed onscreen during load times—nothing else. It is COMPATIBLE with any typical load screen background image replacer mods, as well as mods that add new messages and/or images.
The rewrites are also designed to mesh well with most load orders containing gameplay-changing mods. The text is purely immersive, utilizing realism rather than direct gameplay instruction. I was also sure to use vague terminology in order to allow some freedom of interpretation; words like "may/might" and phrases such as "it is traditional," instead of making assertions. Unless your mods completely reverse the lore (like vampires immune to fire or Argonians that can't swim), these messages should suit your modded Skyrim much better than vanilla.
Samples of my edits can be found below, if you would like to keep scrolling and get an idea of what is being shared.
Mods of a Similar Nature, Quality, and Style:
Quality Rewrite Patches I've Made for Mods Containing New Messages:
- Revisedthe text in general to fit my own taste. Dull facts that are bluntly written and pointlessly obvious, such as, "Once you've helped someone, they will like you," make me cringe.
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- Revisedreferences to specific skills or abilities so that they still give you the same general info, but in more immersive and mod-friendly terms.
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- Revisedall tips on gameplay mechanics, controls and button presses, UI interactions, and other technical features to be more immersive.
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- Replacedmessages that could not be saved (i.e., they didn't make a point that warranted a rewrite) with new text relevant to whatever vanilla image was tied to their record entries.
Before: [Note: the image paired with this message's record is an elven war axe.] After:
- Correctedvanilla grammar and consistency. Most of it involved heavy abuse of the ellipsis, some questionable capitalization choices (or lack thereof), usage of errant terms, and an outdated lack of adherence to the serial comma. USSEP dealt with many but not all of these instances.
Before: After: Before: After:
- CorrectedUSSEP's grammar. It was mostly inconsistent or atypical capitalization (which I either perpetuated or reverted, respectively), and some errant additions or removals of words.
Before: [Note: the pronoun choice is correct.] USSEP: [Note: the pronoun choice is correct.] After: [Note: getting rid of the pronoun is more accurate and negates the contradiction.]
Before: USSEP: After: [In the USSEP version of the mod, the ITM record is copied over so it reverts USSEP's change.] [In the Non-USSEP version of the mod, this record is not present (it is left unmodified with no overwrites).]